you say tomato ..........

so here is my second "draft" of the titles.
much closer to what i believe will be the final piece.
and a SIGNIFICANT improvement to the first rough cut (yikes !)

i feel that conceptually, it works. aesthetically (for the most part), it works.
but as a whole, well, not quite.
but i am glad i have explored concepts outside the realm of the expected,
while still maintaining a simple aesthetic (as was my goal).



C L I C K
on the image for a very compressed version
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